Title: The Fallen Hammer
what is your genre?
Action Drama
who is your protagonist?
Bjorke Anderfall
what is their goal? Does he achieve their goal by the end of the story?
His goal is to keep his family safe and to get his revenge for what has happened.
why must he achieve this goal?
he must achieve his goal so that the bad tribe will never do what they did to him to others and for his son.
who is the antagonist?
The tribe that attacked him not named yet
What is the antagonist goal? Does he achieve their goal by the end of the story?
the goal of the antagonist is to pillage and destroy. he achieves his goal but then has to fight Banger.
What course of action will the antagonist pursue to achieve his goals?
to keep pillaging and destroying. just keep doing it really.
Why must the antagonist achieve this goal?
the goal of the antagonist is to pillage and destroy. he achieves his goal but then has to fight Banger.
What course of action will the antagonist pursue to achieve his goals?
to keep pillaging and destroying. just keep doing it really.
Why must the antagonist achieve this goal?
so he can keep destroying stuff
What does the protagonist want?
To keep his family safe and to get revenge
What does the protagonist need to learn? What is his conflict? How does it conflict with what the antagonist wants?
He needs to learn that he needs help he cant do everything by himself. He needs to communicate better.
What does the protagonist want?
To keep his family safe and to get revenge
What does the protagonist need to learn? What is his conflict? How does it conflict with what the antagonist wants?
He needs to learn that he needs help he cant do everything by himself. He needs to communicate better.
The conflict is between Banger and the other tribe. because he wants to kil the antagonist which is not what they want.
What is the protagonist going to do in order to meet that need?
Try hard, fight hard and beat them.
Your story is shaping up well but you need to proceed to the step outline phase and think about how many drawings you need to achieve this storyline as time and budget need to be considered. Some good stuff here just need cleaning up a bit. Good work.
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